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Friday, November 20, 2009

Diary Writing

On super sad Sunday, I skipped through the extremely long grass to the playground.

I was on the monkey bars when my quiet cousin pushed me off and the wood pushed my cuticle back and also damaged my toe nail. My toe nail went white, purple then blue. Now it is very sore to squeeze it hard. It is painful to walk on as well. I am so lucky that my toe nail didn't come right off my skin! I am so lucky that I am not in hospital right now. I am glad that I'm at school and not in hospital.

Then we walked back through the long grass to go home. My favourite part was the monkey bars because you can swing, jump, miss bars and climb. I felt extremely happy and excited to go there.

3 comments:

  1. Your introduction hooked my interest! I wanted to keep reading. You have used some great adjectives and adverbs!
    Mrs A.

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  2. Kallani you are really good at your adjective!=]





    Angeline

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